ODD DAYS – Chapter 23

Day 133 – Something I Can Never Have  She sleeps in the nude now, and he likes that. Likes that she’s in his bed, likes that he can reach over anytime during the night and have her naked body pressed against him. Likes to feel her skin flush and warm from his touch, likes that she sleep-
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31 responses

  1. infiniteluvbot Avatar
    infiniteluvbot

    No. No. No. What just happened? Bonnie is stuck there. No. No. No. I’m so sad. Ho hum. I must say that everything was written beautifully. I can see everything in my mind’s eye so clearly and that I thank you for. These two are soooooooo hot together. I cant handle it.

  2. clararosetyler Avatar
    clararosetyler

    I can’t believe what just happened? I just have no words to describe how sad I’m 🙁 🙁 I can’t believe that Bonnie is all alone in this awful place and Damon returned home. I can’t even to write this comment because I cry like a crazy girl 🙁 🙁 You did greate job, you wrote absolutely good chapter but you broke my heart 🙁 🙁 Will the people from the real MF be sad that Bonnie didn’t return or they will be busy enjoying Damon’s return?? (I’m angry).

    1. Stella Avatar

      Thank you so much! I had reservations about leaving Bonnie there, but it had to be done! And Damon and the MF folks are in for a crazy ride, LOL. I’ll be updating soon, trying to get a few chapters ahead, and then another story took over my brain. But the real MF adventures are coming!

  3. JustStockton Avatar
    JustStockton

    I just died! Literally I just died. Came back to life and had to write this comment down before I curl into a ball and lament to why Bonnie can’t have nice things. Gosh, Damon should have trusted her intuition. He was trying to make this easier on her. I sort of expected this but it didn’t make it any less painful when it happened. It feels like an end of an act with this chapter. And it was a solid ending at that. I’ve really enjoyed this epic yarn you’re spinning and am anxiously awaiting what happens next. Thanks for posting this amazing story! Gonna go curl up in my ball now until your next update.

    1. Stella Avatar

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I have to admit, there will be alot more fetal position crying in the next few chapters, LOL
      But it will be worth it in the end, I swear!

  4. aliciaayoj Avatar
    aliciaayoj

    My heat just broke into a million pieces. This is amazing and thank you.

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Aw, thank you so much!

  5. Adina Avatar

    What a gut wrenching chapter. Your writing is amazing.

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank you!

  6. infiniteluvbot Avatar
    infiniteluvbot

    No. No. Take it back. Im crying so hard right now. Bonnie alone. No. This was a great chapter. When she asks for him to let her go I bawled. Then she said I love you, wwwaaahhhh!!! I hope she’s no alone for long. I hope nothing happens to her as she goes to the tomb. I hope she can do the spell again. Thank you for such a great chapter.

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Hooray! It was really happy to hit the right emotional notes with it, thank you so much!

  7. blackexcellencedefined Avatar
    blackexcellencedefined

    But AMAZING CHAPTER! 😍😍😍😍😍

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      LOL Thank you!

  8. blackexcellencedefined Avatar
    blackexcellencedefined

    I am SOOO UPSET RIGHT NOW!!!! Stupid Philomene and her stupid doll

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      I know! But it had to be done, lol

  9. Hi!!

    I’M SO MAD AT YOU RIGHT NOW!!! Yes!! I’m yelling at you!!! You made me feel happy one second and then broken at the next second, that’s so mean!!!

    Okay, now that I let you know my angryness (?), I gotta tell you that I MISSED YOU!! I came back as much as I could just to see if this story was updated, and today I find it updated, and I was so happy to see that pic of the eclipse!! Just to be tearful at the end of the chapter :'( :'( . As much as my Bamon heart loves to see-read them together, I actually enjoyed their time apart in the TV show, when Damon was all about getting her back. I kinda expected Damon to go back and help her, not Jeremy, but whatever.

    Back to the fanfic topic, I really hope we get a double POV in every coming chapter (pretty pleeeease!), because I really suffer when I know about Bonnie but not about Damon, or viceversa.

    DAMN THAT STUPID, CREEPY DOLL!!!

    Thank you for the chapie, ♥

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      LOL! I’M SORRY! But I had to do it. Honestly, I had second thoughts about leaving Bon alone, but I also love the idea of Damon going bonkers trying to get her back. Plus, I had already set everything up to have Bonnie be left behind, and when I started to rethink it, it was too late to change anything. So, I went for it.
      There wont be double POV in every chapter, but there will be a few. Damon’s got some shit to handle back in the real world, the Mystic Falls gang all gots opinions, and Bonnie is officially on a mission to save herself… so it will be an adventure!

  10. Victoire Avatar
    Victoire

    Aw man, I didn’t see that coming at all. Poor Bonnie. Poor Damon. I think my heart broke with Damon’s. I like your take on the separation between the two. I love your take on the spell to liberate them from the Prison World. I definitely can’t wait for the next chapter!

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! New chapter should be up this week!

  11. NOOOOOOO!!!!! 😩😩😫😫😭😭😭😭😭

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      I’m sorry, LOL

  12. aryanatchios Avatar
    aryanatchios

    Ahhhhhhh dammit!! I just wanted them both back safe and happy but that’s just too good to be true. Can’t wait to see what else you’ve got in store and how the hell Bonnie is gonna get back (because she has to). Great chapter!

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank you! You know I had to put them through a bit more angst, LOL

  13. amberawesten Avatar
    amberawesten

    Omgawd!!! I have been waiting for this update and you did not disappoint! I can’t wait to see what Damon goes through to get her back…and don’t get me started on the gangs reaction to his odd behavior!!! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! I need more like yesterday😘😘😘😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank yo so much! Yeah, Damon is gonna lose his shit, HAHAHAHA! Update coming soon!

  14. sammee71 Avatar
    sammee71

    No! I’d hoped they’d both make it but knew something would go wrong. Another great chapter!

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank you!

  15. introvertedxxmusings Avatar
    introvertedxxmusings

    Awwww noooo Bonnieeeeee!!!!

    I just knew that damn doll was going to literally guve them more hell. Wth man. Although they apart I can’t wait for the reunion. Their love is so beautiful in this story!!!

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank you! That’s the most important part to me – that the emotion between the two is there. So thanks for mentioning that!

  16. Jessie_monster Avatar
    Jessie_monster

    What an absolute gut punch of a chapter. Thank you.

    1. Stella Avatar
      Stella

      Thank you for reading!



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