ODD DAYS – Chapter 17
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“She was nothing but a selfish thirsty bitch who left generations of Bennetts to clean up her mess. Skank.” That was a line for the ages. For all the children to gather around for storytime and witness in its awesomeness. THE TRUTH! if I ever heard it uttered. I mean, I’m not going to blame the Bennetts for Silas being Silas and Qetisyah reacting accordingly. But the OG Bennett did not think it through. I’ve always been irritated with how family oriented Qetsiyah has always NOT been and how family oriented Ayanna was. I’d like to think Sheila and Bonnie take after Ayanna’s side. Wonder who Lucy favors since we didn’t get much from her.
Another stellar chapter. This is where I left off I think or maybe the chapter I reviewed so sorry for the extra words that might have already have been said. Loved the two of them on the island together. And I loved the real conversation they had at the end. Not sure what’s going to happen when they go back but some of these words needed to be said. And I’m glad they were. Super appreciative of getting to see your updates. Thanks again for creating this website and posting your work. Been really nice catching up.
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Yes, I remember we talked about this on A03 when the story was still posted there! Thank you for coming over and commenting here too!
You are so faithful, and wonderful, and your comments are truly one of the reasons I keep writing. I’m grateful!
As for the Bennett family stuff… I’ve got some ideas on that which I’ll be exploring in Pagan Poetry. I posted the first chapter of that one, but Odd Days took over my brain, lol
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